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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 07/09/13, 08:52 pm

Name: Riverleaf

Gender: She-Cat

Age: 130 Moons

Clan: RiverClan

Rank: Medicine Cat

Mate & Kits: Forbidden, unmated, no kits.

Personality: Calm, clever, resourceful, helpful, friendly, good listener, stubborn, caring, strong.

Past: Found as a small kit near/on the border, near death, and was adopted into RiverClan, and named Riverkit after the clan that adopted her and the river she was found near.

Looks: Riverleaf is a slender, medium-furred she-cat with gray, soft fur, and dark gray stripes on her back, stretching to her sides, on her forelegs, and near the end of her tail eventually ending in a dark gray tip. Her ears are dark gray-tipped.

Dark gray stripes are on her forehead as well, and she has luminous, beautiful blue eyes. Her fangs are regular-sized. She rarely uses her claws, unless in case of emergency, and thus they are not chipped at all. She has a small scar on her left foreleg, (on the left side, right above her thumb toe on her leg) it seems to just be a deep scratch that she got from a thorn, branch, or some other type of object found in nature..


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Post by megarin on 07/09/13, 09:07 pm

Hello there! :3
This is a nice first form. But if you saw on the posts near the top of the Character Creation board there is a post with the forms to fill out.
Of course you can always make your own form as long as it contains all of the needed elements.
I couldn't help but notice your form lacked a personality.
And I would also suggest possibly adding more detail to the appearance.
If you are aiming for a high position I would suggest these things.
Thank you.
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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 07/09/13, 09:08 pm

Sorry! Forgot the personality spot. And sorry, I'm not sure how I could put more detail in the appearance..? 3:
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Post by megarin on 07/09/13, 09:19 pm

It's okay. Mistakes happen. :)
And I didn't mean to sound rude before. My apologies. I am very tired right now.
By adding more detail I just mean in little ways. Tell about some of the precise things as well as the normal broad things.
You may describe the texture of her fur, or perhaps the way her whiskers or paw pads are.
Some people put a lot of detail into their forms.
Here are some examples of longer forms.
http://thenewera.aforumfree.com/t392-adolpha-just-adolpha-finem-hp
http://thenewera.aforumfree.com/t312-that-willow-that-makes-only-others-weep-willowpaw-s-biography
Not all forms are as long as these ones. But Mini, the site Admin prefers HPs with a well developed personality and easy to imagine, vivid description.
If you ever need any help with forms or anything else feel free to ask me.
I would also recommend posting in the Introduce yourself section.
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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 07/09/13, 09:20 pm

Ah mmk, no problem. And I know how you feel! I've been tired all day. D:
But no probs, you didn't sound rude. ^_^
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Post by megarin on 07/09/13, 09:25 pm

Thanks for understanding.
Sometimes I'm really insensitive when I am tired. I don't realize it most of the times either.
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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 07/09/13, 09:26 pm

Yup. I slap people when they try and mess with me when I'm tired. e.e
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Post by megarin on 07/09/13, 09:33 pm

I only do that hen I'm actually sleeping.
Sometimes my mind is awake when I sleep. I sleep talk and slap my sister in the face.
xP
Anyways, welcome to New Era.
Mini may not accept this form for a while. She is a bit inactive due to personal problems but should be back soon.
As a mod I'm not supposed to accept HPs.
Because I'm in charge while she's gone I'll say that you can RP this cat as the Riverclan Medicine Cat for now until she just sets it in stone.
In other words we will act like she is the Riverclan Med but it's not official.
Is that 'kay with you?
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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- on 07/09/13, 09:42 pm

Yeah. Thanks! =)
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Post by *Smoke* on 15/11/13, 04:33 pm

Shadow, you are the deputy of RiverClan as well, right? I don't really think you should have more than 1 HP in a clan, as it takes the chance from others to have an HP in that clan.
Also, I'm not sure if we told you this, but you are limited to only 2 HPs :)
I only have more than 2 because I play Mini's HPs, since they are well needed and she doesn't really want to let them go, so I roleplay them for her.

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