Redfur Shadowclan maybe future deputy, but will die

http://longlivethewarriorcats.webs.com/sunflamee.jpg He has blue eyes though

Redfur
Tom
Shadowclan
17 and a half moons
wants to be deputy when Phantomtail becomes Phantomstar, but Redfur dies and never gets to be a leader (Redstar)
Wise, smart, loyal, respectful and kind.
Almost the best at hunting
large Dark red tabby  maine coon with blue eyes
Brother to Snakewhisker(Evil) and Clover -used to be Streakpaw until Bloodclan changed his name.- (who had been caught as a kittypet and now in Bloodclan, also evil) Son to  Idk and Idk (Anyone wanna be is parents?)

Grew up in Shadowclan and born there with Snakekit and Streakkit by his side, Snakepaw and him were best of friends but were sad that Streakpaw was captured by twolegs and made a kittypet, till' he ran away and joined Bloodclan as Clover... "I'm sorry Redpaw and Snakepaw but now I am part of Bloodclan and loyal to it." Clover told them sadly.
On the other hand Snakepaw had gotten jealous from Redpaw being great at hunting, and Clover being the good looking one who would be succesful with a mate and kits. Snakepaw was teased about being a loser and not catching anything. REdpaw tried to help him but he said, "I don't nmeed your help Redpaw, you'll just make me look worse...having my brother as an mentor. Fox dung, I look like a kittypet and can't catch anything!" Now he has become evil and is part of the dark forest team. REdfur has grown suspicious about hi own brother and Clover. Snakewhisker plans to murder him, for "embarrising" him and always showing off.
Redfur now is one of the best warriors at hinting in his clan and is loyal and working hard to become deputy.

I think it would be so sad if Hazelcloud secretly fell in love with him and then he died D:

It would :( Redfur could start to notice she likes him and he could like her back, then almost asks to be mates until the battle and he dies from Snakewhisker and Clover teaming up on him. Should I do that or wait till he's older? :3

I think Shockstar is nearing her end, and maybe Phantomtail will become leader. I'll e-mail his creator and see if she can come back (she left for a family emergency a while ago, and something really bad happened so she can't come on anymore). I'll see if her status has changed since then :)

Hey Smoke, where did Megarin go? I haven't seen her in months.
And that would be awesome, you could do either one. We can just make it up as we go along. :)

Ok that would be great! :3 Ty!