Stormfeather of Thunderclan

Name: Stormfeather

Clan/Tribe: Thunderclan

Appearance: A frail old Jet black She-Cat. She has light green eyes full of fierceness, and a Neat fluffy pelt. She is always in her moss nest sleeping or out in the sun sleeping and telling the kits stories of battles and wars.

Personality: She a fierce, Tired, Dramatic, and Stubborn when other disrespectful youngsters tell her to speed up. She also has a sharp tongue and always wins a fight of yowling with youngsters.

History: She had three other siblings, Thunderclaw, Pondpelt, and Snow. Snow had been taken away and was raised as a well behaved Kittypet while both her brothers had died of rogues killing them. She had stayed up a week staring blankly at their bodies, as they were suddenly berried right in front of her. But, as an apprentice she had a mentor that was named Sunfur, and she had died as well. Stormfeather then noticed she was all alone in this cruel world, with Tigerstar as her father and Smallflower whom he had killed was her mother. She had met another apprentice in her time, and they soon fell into a young love, Stormpaw and Bluepaw together. But, They were simply going against their clans and had to depart and she had never stopped loving the Skyclan warrior since, and she stayed loyal to her clan after that. She would never fall in love again because, simply she gave her heart to Bluemoon. Stormfeather had accomplished all her warrior duties and had retired to the Elders den, and had been happy since then, because she had great friends and a kind heart to others. She will always respect the clan leader and deputy, as well. - True story

THAT IS ALL ( For now )

This is great for a first bio, although the appearance could be a bit longer. Since it's not an HP you can go ahead and RP with her :)

Thank you so much, Smoke! :)

Kittykat1 wrote:Name: Stormfeather

Clan/Tribe: Thunderclan

Appearance: A frail old Jet black She-Cat. She has light green eyes full of fierceness, and a Neat fluffy pelt. She is always in her moss nest sleeping or out in the sun sleeping and telling the kits stories of battles and wars.

Personality: She a fierce, Tired, Dramatic, and Stubborn when other disrespectful youngsters tell her to speed up. She also has a sharp tongue and always wins a fight of yowling with youngsters.

History: She had three other siblings, Thunderclaw, Pondpelt, and Snow. Snow had been taken away and was raised as a well behaved Kittypet while both her brothers had died of rogues killing them. She had stayed up a week staring blankly at their bodies, as they were suddenly berried right in front of her. But, as an apprentice she had a mentor that was named Sunfur, and she had died as well. Stormfeather then noticed she was all alone in this cruel world, with Tigerstar as her father and Smallflower whom he had killed was her mother. She had met another apprentice in her time, and they soon fell into a young love, Stormpaw and Bluepaw together. But, They were simply going against their clans and had to depart and she had never stopped loving the Skyclan warrior since, and she stayed loyal to her clan after that. She would never fall in love again because, simply she gave her heart to Bluemoon. Stormfeather had accomplished all her warrior duties and had retired to the Elders den, and had been happy since then, because she had great friends and a kind heart to others. She will always respect the clan leader and deputy, as well. - True story

THAT IS ALL ( For now )

Watch out for all the incorrect capitalizations, other than that it is a nice bio for your first ^^

No problemo Kitty. Didn't think about pointing out the errors, good catch Mini~