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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 08:57 pm

Moonpaw Medicine Cat Apprentice 20k7qdw

Character name:Moonpaw


Nickname:Moony


Character age:10 moons


Gender:She-cat


Clan/Tribe:Riverclan


Rank:Medicine Cat Apprentice


Personality: (Long Description)My character is intelligent and athletic so she can hold herself in a fight. She is quick to learn and understand and is also very caring. Though she still tends to over think the seriousness of an injury.

Appearance: (Long Description)She is a silver tabby with a black striped-swirl pattern and one green eye and one blue, she has a long black striped tail and white paws with very sharp claws. On her forehead is a birthmark that is a patch of white fur in a crescent moon shape.She also has one thin scar on her left cheek from a bad experience as a kit.


Likes/Dislikes:She likes taking care of kits and elders
(unless they're being really cranky)and dislikes when male apprentice warriors think they're better than her.


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Post by megarin 15/10/13, 09:07 pm

Hey, there!
I'll edit in you picture, now!
If I may make a suggestion, maybe make the descriptions a little bit longer.
Smoke doesn't always accept short forms because we want to make sure our HP cats have the best role play owners.
So work on that if you can after I edit the pic in.
Ko?
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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 09:08 pm

Ya sure
i kinda just ran out of ideas but i have a few new ones
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Post by megarin 15/10/13, 09:10 pm

Okay!
But I will say this is really, very good! Especially for a first form when you were a little confused on what to do!
:3
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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 09:17 pm

I have to go but cant finish my editind what do I do?
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Post by megarin 15/10/13, 09:17 pm

I PMed you.
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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 09:19 pm

Its not alot but it will have to do
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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 09:20 pm

for now at least
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Post by megarin 15/10/13, 09:21 pm

Okay.
See you tomorrow!
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Post by Catt 15/10/13, 09:23 pm

Bey megarin
Bey New Era see ya in a few hours
(I wouldn't get of at all but I have to babysit)
Bey!!
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Post by *Smoke* 16/10/13, 06:25 am

It looks good Moon. It looks a bit like my old ShadowClan medicine cat- Moonleaf. I'll be honest here- I wanted Moonpaw to be a reincarnation of her, lol X3
But you don't have to or anything.
It looks pretty darn good for a first, so I'll accept it. Maybe you could update it when you get better :)
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Post by megarin 16/10/13, 07:36 am

Yeah I think she was going to update it whenever she got back on.
And really, smoke?
Reincarnated not once, not twice, but three loves worth of reincarnations?
Man, someday that cat is gonna have loved longer than a leader.
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Post by *Smoke* 16/10/13, 03:22 pm

Moonleaf hasn't been reincarnated AT ALL. Moonshadow was just named after her because they looked a bit alike and it was like a sorry from Rain's son.
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Post by Catt 16/10/13, 04:42 pm

Hey smoke, I can do that if you want
I'll just have to do a little background reading on her
I would also like some tips on what to improve
I thought since im new I could use a few tips
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Post by *Smoke* 16/10/13, 07:39 pm

No, it's fine :)
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Post by Catt 16/10/13, 09:08 pm

Are you sure it might be fun
:D
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Post by -»༺cяyρтCяyѕтαlѕ༻«- 20/10/13, 08:18 pm

Yay! Apprentice! :D
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Post by Catt 22/10/13, 05:17 pm


I guess i'm now your apprentice...
Riverleaf
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Post by *Smoke* 22/10/13, 05:24 pm

Lol, alright alright. Take a look at Moonleaf's bio :3
https://thenewera.aforumfree.com/t14-moonleaf-shadowclan-medicine-cat-now-19-moons-old?highlight=moonleaf
One of my earlier works, not my best but I like it :3
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Post by Catt 22/10/13, 05:32 pm


You have a very interesting character
I would be honored to be her reincarnation
But I have an idea that you don't have to agree to but I think it would add a nice twist!
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Post by *Smoke* 22/10/13, 05:33 pm

...Idea? I FREAKING LIVE FOR IDEAS!

Lol, weirdness over. What's the idea?
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Post by Catt 22/10/13, 05:37 pm


Actually never mind maybe for another character! :)


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Post by Catt 22/10/13, 05:46 pm


I also REALLY love your signature it's very... Doctory?
I can't think of another word :/
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