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Leo of BloodClan
by NecroFancy 31/10/13, 04:00 pm
Name: Leo
Age: 25 Moons
Breed: Manx
Gender: Tom/Gay
Pic:
Necklace:
Personality:
Leo is a very suspicious cat, to begin with. Which is a good trait to have in BloodClan; you don't normally know who you can really trust in that clan.
He is also very quiet as it's better not to say anything wrong or you will regret it later when your heads on a silver platter.
Family: None
Last edited by Scelus on 05/11/13, 03:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:36 pm
Appearance, personality (full description maybe?), how Leo and Broken met, their history, etc.?
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by NecroFancy 05/11/13, 03:38 pm
still working on the personality help me and pinkamena
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:38 pm
Lol, ok. Just come up with 5 traits. I'll show you how to make it into a well written paragraph :3
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by NecroFancy 05/11/13, 03:41 pm
ok
Mistrustful Cognitive
Expressively Defensive
shy
suspicous
Mistrustful Cognitive
Expressively Defensive
shy
suspicous
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:49 pm
That's 6; you're outdoing yourself, lol. But it's good you put more than needed; always good to challenge yourself.
Ok, so what you do is you take 1 trait, and put it into two sentences, describing why your character is like that. Like if I had 'Hot-tempered' I would put something like the following.
But don't put down their traits and then do what I just showed you- it'll look kind of bad. If you DO decide to put traits in your bio as well, use ones similar, but not the exact same traits.
Ok, so what you do is you take 1 trait, and put it into two sentences, describing why your character is like that. Like if I had 'Hot-tempered' I would put something like the following.
Blahpaw is very hot-tempered, though he doesn't like people knowing it. He gets angry easily and doesn't let things go any way other than his, so you don't want to do anything wrong around him.
Then you do it for the other traits, and have it as all one paragraph :3 It's a good trick to have.But don't put down their traits and then do what I just showed you- it'll look kind of bad. If you DO decide to put traits in your bio as well, use ones similar, but not the exact same traits.
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by NecroFancy 05/11/13, 03:51 pm
umm can you do it for me? the first two are put together like Mistrustful Cognitive is suposed to be together
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:55 pm
Oh ok.
No, I can't do it for you Scelus. I can do the first sentence for you (the opening sentence) but you should try and do the rest on your own, since you should try and build your skills.
First topic:
Leo is a very suspicious cat, to begin with. Which is a good trait to have in BloodClan; you don't normally know who you can really trust in that clan.
No, I can't do it for you Scelus. I can do the first sentence for you (the opening sentence) but you should try and do the rest on your own, since you should try and build your skills.
First topic:
Leo is a very suspicious cat, to begin with. Which is a good trait to have in BloodClan; you don't normally know who you can really trust in that clan.
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:56 pm
You can start the next sentence with something along the lines of 'Also, he.....' or 'He is also....'.
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Re: Leo of BloodClan
by *Smoke* 05/11/13, 03:59 pm
Lol, just remember to make all the traits be one paragraph TOGETHER. Not separate paragraphs.
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