Onyxpaw - Shadowclan Apprentice

Character name: Onyxpaw


Nickname: none.


Character age: 7 moons


Gender: Tom


Clan/Tribe: Shadowclan


Rank: Apprentice


Personality: (Long Description) Onyxpaw, while his size and stature intimidate many, is not a mean, aggressive cat. He tends to be very reserved, and while other cats may take this behavior as snotty or stuck up, Onyxpaw believes it is better to be seen and not heard, especially when dealing with those above him in rank. Despite his rather gentle nature, Onyxpaw refuses to back down from a challenge and his stubborn nature can often get him into trouble with his peers. Unlike the stereotypical Shadowclan cat, Onyxpaw is respectful and tries not to start fights using taunts and name-calling. However, he is still a young tom, which means he is still very impressionable, and without a father or mother around, his mentor will greatly influence his personality, and ultimately shape him into his final form.


Appearance: (Long Description)


Onyxpaw has always been a bit larger than most cats his age. He has sleek black fur that blends into his surroundings, especially in the darkest of nights under the thick pine trees in his clan territory. His large, ice-blue eyes pierce through the dusk and are often a giveaway of where he crouches and hides. Long, white whiskers protrude through the dense, thick, black fur that covers Onyxpaw's face. His paws are large, with sharp, protruding claws. He has an extra toe on his left, frontal paw. His tail is relatively skinny compared to his muscle on his body. However, he is extremely large still. His shoulders ripple when he walks, and Onyxpaw enjoys the feeling of having such huge muscle built. When he reaches his top speed, Onyxpaw's lengthy legs can stretch more than two cat-lengths.


Mental Disabilities: none.


Likes/Dislikes:
Likes:
-training
-hunting
-spending time alone
-spending time with peers

Dislikes:
-when he is taunted
-unnecessary violence
-taking care of kits

Current mate: none.


Current crush: none. (will develop)


Offspring: none.


Family: none.

Mini feral???? :O Feral has blue eyes and is completely black toooz!

Very nice form Onyx! I see you went straight for the advanced bio, and you have done it very well actually.
My cat in ShadowClan, Shockstar, currently does not have an apprentice, so if you would like, she can mentor Onyxpaw :)

Thanks for the nice words about the bio. :)

That would be amazing, actually. Let me know when you would like to start training, and I'll happily join or start a thread.

I'll make the topic tomorrow, since it's actually pretty late where I am now :)

Can i have the next apprentice for feral?

I've made the topic for Onyxpaw's training :)
Here's the link: https://thenewera.aforumfree.com/t997-training-in-the-shadows-private-smoke-onyx#18875

Yes, you can Feral. If you would like I could create a ShadowClan apprentice. It's been a while since I've made a good ol' character X3

You dont have to do that but thanks